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Offline RollingMeowcat

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Script : Sky Temple
« on: May 09, 2014, 04:01:38 AM »
I think I should stop posting before we really start translating.
Reference:
http://www5d.biglobe.ne.jp/~aoi-k/other/e_w4.html

The hero medal ヒーローメダル
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ここにもげんじゅうが!
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I've became one of the heroes! ボクも、ヒーローのなかまいりだ!
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Lolo fell! ロロがおちた!
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"Gigantic Bomb"! ギガンティック・ボンバー!
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Joka appears ジョーカーとうじょう
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Adio~s♪ アーディオ~ス♪
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やくそくは まもんなくちゃね!
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Confronting Joka! たいけつ!ジョーカー
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Joka's cute power ジョーカーのキュートなパワー
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むねをはって!
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Re: Script: Temple In The Sky
« Reply #1 on: February 07, 2015, 02:42:29 PM »
*Disclaimer: This post contains SPOILERS. Please tread with caution. I will not take responsibility for any spoilers that you encounter in this post.*
Hey, all! Here are my translations of the Temple In The Sky script from scratch, one that's literal and 'Aoi-like' and another that I interpreted more for smoother reading and for the patch. If you have any comments or suggestions for the script, feel free to post them! :)

A Quick Note:
Anything that is put in hard brackets [] means that whatever is in there is not yet set in stone and is subject to change. Any suggestions for changes are welcome.

Another Long Note:
You'll notice that I have included two translations. One that is sloppy but somewhat literal and another that is interpereted in the way that I would translate the game. This is because the Japanese language is different from English in thought, feeling, concept, and grammar/syntax, and literally translating Japanese in a way that makes sense is impossible. Please read both to understand roughly the concept from the original Japanese version and the way I would translate the game.

Also:
Pointed brackets like these <> will represent a block of text.
These usually require the A or B button to continue, and the text will clear from the screen after the end of each block.

About [Pause]:
These [Pause] tags often indicate a brief moment when the game will stop before continuing with the dialog or Klonoa's narration. These tags also act as a trigger for certain actions characters will make during cutscenes such as jumping or changing expressions, so, for the sake of the romhacker, I decided to include these in my translation post.

Now onto the translation!!! :D

Temple In The Sky
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ヒーローメダル (Hero Medal)
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Interpreted Translation:
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* (クロノア:アンチクショーッッッ!!) I found this line while dumping the script from the ROM, but it's not used in-game.[/spoiler]
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ここにもげんじゅうが! (Phantom Beasts Here Too!)
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Interpreted Translation:
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[/spoiler]
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ボクも、ヒーローのなかまいりだ! (I'm Also One Of The Heroes!)
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Interpreted Translation:
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[/spoiler]
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ロロがおちた! (Lolo Fell!)
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Interpreted Translation:
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[/spoiler]
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ギガンティック・ボンバー! (Gigantic Bomber!)
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Interpreted Translation:
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[/spoiler]
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ジョーカーとうじょう (Joka's Appearance)
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Interpreted Translation:
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[/spoiler]
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アーディオ~ス♪ (Aaadio~s♪)
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Interpreted Translation:
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[/spoiler]
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やくそくは まもんなくちゃね! (I Gotta Keep My Promises!)
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Interpreted Translation:
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[/spoiler]
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たいけつ!ジョーカー (The Fight Against Joka!)
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[/spoiler]
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ジャーカーのキュートなパワー (Joka's Cute Powers)
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[/spoiler]
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むねをはって! (Hold Your Head High!)
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Interpreted Translation:
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[/spoiler]