*Disclaimer: This post contains SPOILERS. Please tread with caution. I will not take responsibility for any spoilers that you encounter in this post.*Hey, all! Here are my translations of the Breezegale script from scratch, one that's literal and 'Aoi-like' and another that I interpreted more for smoother reading and for the patch. If you have any comments or suggestions for the script, feel free to post them!
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A Quick Note:
Anything that is put in hard brackets [] means that whatever is in there is not yet set in stone and is subject to change. Any suggestions for changes are welcome.
Another Long Note:
You'll notice that I have included two translations. One that is sloppy but somewhat literal and another that is interpereted in the way that I would translate the game. This is because the Japanese language is different from English in thought, feeling, concept, and grammar/syntax, and literally translating Japanese in a way that makes sense is impossible. Please read both to understand roughly the concept from the original Japanese version and the way I would translate the game.
Also:
Pointed brackets like these <> will represent a block of text.
These usually require the A or B button to continue, and the text will clear from the screen after the end of each block.
About [Pause]:
These [Pause] tags often indicate a brief moment when the game will stop before continuing with the dialog or Klonoa's narration. These tags also act as a trigger for certain actions characters will make during cutscenes such as jumping or changing expressions, so, for the sake of the romhacker, I decided to include these in my translation post.
Now onto the translation!!!
Breezegale-----------------------------------------------------
オープニング (Opening)
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Interpreted Translation:
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ひらかないつぼみ ヒカリサクラ ([Radiance Blossom], The Bloomless Bud)
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Interpreted Translation:
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カイブツをぶっとばせ! (Beat Up The Monsters!)
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Interpreted Translation:
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ヒーロー、ヒーロー! (Hero~, Hero~!)
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Interpreted Translation:
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ボクにまかせて! (Leave It To Me!)
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Interpreted Translation:
[/spoiler]
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ロロとのやくそく (A Promise With Lolo)
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Interpreted Translation:
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たいけつ!ジャイアントムゥ (The Fight Against Giant Moos!)
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Interpreted Translation:
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ナゾのおとこ (A Man Of Mystery)
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Interpreted Translation:
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ヒカリサクラを とりかえせ! (Reclaim The Radiance Blossom!)
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Interpreted Translation:
[/spoiler]
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かえせかえせかえせ! (GiveItGiveItGiveIt!)
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Interpreted Translation:
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きたれわかものサイキョーとっくん! (Come, Youth! Best Special Training!)
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Interpreted Translation:
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オトコならコブシでかたれ (If You're A Man, Talk With Your Fists)
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Interpreted Translation:
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クロノア・トルネード・アタック! (Klonoa Tornado Attack!)
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Interpreted Translation:
* (バルー:............いってみるモンじゃのう...。) I'm not really sure what Balue is trying to say here...[/spoiler]
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ぼくじょうでまってるぜ (I'll Be Waitin' At The Ranch)
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Interpreted Translation:
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マグナぼくじょうのけっとう (The Duel Of Magna Ranch)
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Interpreted Translation:
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ロロのしゅっぱつ (Lolo's Departure)
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Interpreted Translation:
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サイコーのたびだち (The Greatest Departure)
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Interpreted Translation:
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Thank you to those who took the time to read this!
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