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Offline Graystripe2000

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Something I made
« on: July 14, 2014, 04:56:43 pm »
Made this in paint. Hope you guys like it. Title means "Klonoa of the Wind: Mystical Oracle of the Heart".

« Last Edit: July 14, 2014, 05:18:48 pm by Windbullet »
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Re: Something I made
« Reply #1 on: July 14, 2014, 05:07:19 pm »
Uh... I don't really know that much Japanese. Can you explain to me what that means?

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Re: Something I made
« Reply #2 on: July 14, 2014, 05:17:21 pm »
I like it :D but I wish I could understand what it says besides the obvious Klonoa of the wind part.

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Re: Something I made
« Reply #3 on: July 14, 2014, 05:19:48 pm »
Guys I edited the post so you know what it means now. Sorry, I forgot all about that.
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Re: Something I made
« Reply #4 on: July 14, 2014, 07:02:12 pm »
This sounds like a title to a new game. I know it's not real, but do you have a plot for it?

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Re: Something I made
« Reply #5 on: July 14, 2014, 07:12:56 pm »
Nope. I can think of one, but it'll take a good bit of time.
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Re: Something I made
« Reply #6 on: July 14, 2014, 07:47:01 pm »
  • The 風のクロノア is badly cut out from existing artwork and you can see bites and nibbles in the sides of the text.
  • The choice of font of the rest of the text is terrible when put in contrast against the title font that was cut out - contradiction colors (Maroon and Black) and incorrect typesetting
  • Placement choice of Text is segregated
  • The google translation title shows a lack of understanding of Japanese - You won't get this one past me
  • The completely symmetrical red and pink heart also contradicts with the asymmetrical stylised yellow and blue font that you've cut out

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Re: Something I made
« Reply #7 on: July 14, 2014, 08:14:13 pm »
The cut job you did with the logo could use work though. As far as the text you input, I would definitely change it up. If you want, I could show you a place where you could get some free fonts.


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Re: Something I made
« Reply #8 on: July 14, 2014, 08:27:40 pm »
You can do that. It dosen't matter when. It's not like I'm doing another one of these anytime soon.
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