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Quite an interesting read.I did notice a small amount of typos.Title: "Issued Out" Striked should be changed to Struck http://dreamcrusaders.the-comic.org/comics/30/There are a few I's that are not capitalized.Page 27 (middle right), 28 (bottom middle), 30 (top middle and bottom right),
Just read the new issue and gotta say, it was a blast. I especially liked how you gave Claire a sort of childlike personality. Though there is one suggestion about the rate of posting I would like to give. I understand that a complex work like this demands time but, up until now, you've been posting only when you've finished 10 whole pages, which results in the story only getting updated every 2 months. There is a way of us getting more frequent updates without you having to speed things up: posting each page as soon as you're done with it (instead of waiting until you finish another 9). If I'm not mistaken, this was how the original Noctis Sol used to be updated. If you do decide to use this method, I would definitely recommend you finish the whole script for the next few pages before starting to draw one so you can get a better notion of where you want the story to head next.