[Tortwag]

I... actually added the introduction to Vision 2-2 to this one to make it a tad more complete. That, and I really wanted the next one to start the way I originally planned it.

Anyways, hope you've enjoyed it, everyone  As usual, comments, appreciations and constructive criticism are appreciated. I'll post this on Fanfiction by the end of the weekend - in the meantime, I'll work on that emblem I imagine for Lilyacoo and promised I'd draw 

[BinaryPulsar]

ohhhhh that was a really cool chapter!
Learning more about Lilyacoo's past and stuff was really interesting. Poor Klonoa had a bad time didn't he? 
Super excited for the next chapter!

[SyraxAxoJaxco]

Poor Klonoa had a bad time didn't he?

Indeed, Binary, indeed.

I'm still waiting for your emblem to finish.
Finish it ASAP please...
I really want to see it. :3

Anyway, another nice chapter from our dear friend @Tortwag
Hope to see the next chapter quick.

BE QUICK, EY CAPT' COO!
* Captain Coo throws daggers at SyraxAxoJaxco

* SyraxAxoJaxco dead

 

[Tortwag]

@SyraxAxoJaxco You amazing devil XD Can't believe you fooled me twice with that April's Fools - not to mention I was really taking this seriously and planning on review my plans for the next chapters and make 'em better - which I'm trying to do anyways.

I know, I know. I've done the outline, so all I gotta do now is add the wings, scan it, and get the colors ready thanks to my good pals Paint.Net and Photoshop.

Thanks! Glad you actually liked it XD
Time and I aren't very good buddies though, but i'll do my best, as usual.

HAH! SERVES YOU RIGHT XD She might just HAVE those daggers though


@BinaryPulsar Thanks, and yes he did XD

[Tortwag]

Double-Posting for an important update:

So I'm currently writing that chapter I'm supposed to write every week (as in, I was until a few seconds ago) and I just received a mail from my Game Design school saying that 1: my application to their game design contest had been accepted, and 2: I was to reach their place to participate and, hopefully, join the school next year.

Aside that, homework are still a thing, so I have to get them out of the way to... revise my games, as weird as that sounds 
Point is you'll have to expect late chapters again. I'm... really sorry to announce that I'm gonna be late right after recovering from the past weeks, but hey, at least nobody's taken by surprise.
Today I plan to finish at least half up to 3/4 of the chapter for this week, and wil publish it in the following days. Then i'll move straight into the next one, which IS going to be late too - at least until my contest is over.

As for Lilyacoo's emblem, scanning it shouldn't be an issue, but the coloring part is what bothers me - unless you people want to see the outline and an eventual black and white version before I color it via Photoshop? You tell me



Welp, that's it for the news, folks! I'll go back to writing for now. Bye!


PS: Forgot to mention. This topic has 647 views, and even though I have to come back to it myself a lot to correct stuff, I really doubt that the counter raised just because of me, so thanks a ton, guys and gals! Even though I assume a lot of people read this without commenting, I'm both surprised and grateful that this little story of mine is actually get attention.



I will keep writing. No matter many times I'm late, I'm not abandoning this story any time soon 

[Tortwag]

Boop!

Just wanted to announce that Vision 2-2 is complete!

Been writing all day today, and I don't even have time to check for typos, because I'm leaving for Paris in about 6 hours - off to participate in that Game Design school contest thingy. So I figured I'd leave you guys with this chapter that's coming out in a few minutes.

EDIT:

[Tortwag]

Back from Valenciennes! Game Design contest is over, holidays have begun, so this time, I'll keep on goin' with my schedule! Hopefully there won't be anymore interruptions. For now I just wanted to announce that Fanfiction has been updated with the new chapters, and that I'm writing this week's chapter as I speak.

[SyraxAxoJaxco]

CABBIT DEMON, DON'T HURT MEEEeee!!

* SyraxAxoJaxco runs.

[Tortwag]

@SyraxAxoJaxco

[Tortwag]

I am really doing an awful job with these deadlines, but I hope the quality I'm trying my best to pour into these chapters make up for the delay. *sigh* In any case, here comes the next vision!