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Re: Klonoa: Crusaders of Pugiland
« Reply #10 on: February 12, 2016, 11:32:44 AM »
Double-posting here to announce that Vision 1-2 is out! You can either go back to Page 1 to read it, or find it down below:

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Enjoy! And as usual, comments, feedback and constructive criticism are always appreciated ;)

Now! Vision 1-3 is already written as well, though it needs a LOT of polishing before bein' published. It's also the last of the "Vision 1" series, which means that we'll be switching to a brand new setting right after it. Stay tuned!
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Re: Klonoa: Crusaders of Pugiland
« Reply #11 on: February 12, 2016, 09:39:23 PM »
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Re: Klonoa: Crusaders of Pugiland
« Reply #12 on: February 13, 2016, 02:45:32 AM »
"running away from scary monsters fills Klonoa with determination"

i loved this chapter! ohhh, i like this new character. if things go how i think they're gonna go i might have a ship on my hands  ;)

can't wait for the next chapter! it's been so long since i read a good Klonoa fanfic!

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Re: Klonoa: Crusaders of Pugiland
« Reply #13 on: February 13, 2016, 09:30:41 AM »
@SyraxAxoJaxco ...Hm. Can't quite see it. Is the typo in the sentence "Lilyacoo touched the one on the far left, and a paw-shaped emblem appeared on it." More specifically, the "and" placed right after the comma?
No plotholes! Yay, I fixed them all :D Gotta keep on writin' with them in mind.


@BinaryPulsar Yes. Yes it does :big_smile: That was actually my favorite scene. Klonoa's encounter with the wolf, I mean.
...I NEED to finish Undertale, I swear...

Thanks, 'cause I loved writin' it ;)  Ohoh, we're having shipping previsions already? That didn't take long XD We'll see how things evolve, though.

That's good to know! Then I'll have to take on Syrax' advice and try to upload regularly, the idea pace being one Vision per week - and post updates in case I'm late or unable to write for a while. Hopefully I can keep up with that.
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Re: Klonoa: Crusaders of Pugiland
« Reply #14 on: February 20, 2016, 05:09:14 PM »
Bump! Due to computer messing with me, the next Vision shall be published tomorrow only. I hope the pace of one vision per week isn't too slow for you guys and gals :)
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Re: Klonoa: Crusaders of Pugiland
« Reply #15 on: February 21, 2016, 08:06:27 AM »
Vision 1-3:
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As usual, comments, feedback and constructive criticism is always appreciated. And this is going to be a two-parter, which means one last Vision before going into a Vision 2-Series. Stay tuned, folks ;)
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Re: Klonoa: Crusaders of Pugiland
« Reply #16 on: February 21, 2016, 04:24:25 PM »
OHHHHHH DAT CLIFF HANGER
You're gonna have me on my toes till the next chapter  :sad_face:
This chapter was great! I can't wait until the next one!

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Re: Klonoa: Crusaders of Pugiland
« Reply #17 on: February 21, 2016, 07:32:23 PM »
Hey Binary, glad you liked the chapter!

AMD YES, FINALLY THROWIN' IN SOME CLIFFHANGERS  :hey: Stay tuned! Do expect a few explanations next chapter  ;)
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Re: Klonoa: Crusaders of Pugiland
« Reply #18 on: February 26, 2016, 07:08:12 AM »
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That cliffhanger...i myself have made my speculation of what will happen next. Well, let's see if my guess is right. Remember that my imagination can run SO wild. TOO WILD, perhaps. :\
Vision 2 will be in the town, i suppose?
Don't stop writing, Mr. Torswag~ :big_smile:

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Re: Klonoa: Crusaders of Pugiland
« Reply #19 on: March 01, 2016, 10:27:39 AM »
@SyraxAxoJaxco Sorry for my late response, but Vision 1-4 is READY to go! I'll answer you first, though :3

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There we go! NOW, for the big update!



Vision 1-4:

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Also, I figured out the problem on page 1: there's a limit of words and characters per each post, and I... well. I reached it. That's why it's not complete. So I guess I'll just have to post links to whatever pages the Visions can be found in, until I eventually post them all in Fanficiton.net.
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