...Hm. Can't quite see it. Is the typo in the sentence "Lilyacoo touched the one on the far left, and a paw-shaped emblem appeared on it." More specifically, the "and" placed right after the comma?
No plotholes! Yay, I fixed them all
Gotta keep on writin' with them in mind.@BinaryPulsar
Yes. Yes it does
That was actually my favorite scene. Klonoa's encounter with the wolf, I mean.
...I NEED to finish Undertale, I swear...
Thanks, 'cause I loved writin' it
Ohoh, we're having shipping previsions already? That didn't take long XD We'll see how things evolve, though.
That's good to know! Then I'll have to take on Syrax' advice and try to upload regularly, the idea pace being one Vision per week - and post updates in case I'm late or unable to write for a while. Hopefully I can keep up with that.