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Klonoa: Crusaders of Pugiland
« on: February 08, 2016, 02:44:12 PM »
Hi there, folks! Name's Shell Master Tortwag, but I guess you can go ahead and call me Tortwag for short - the full title is there only 'cause I love shelled-reptiles.
Don't mind my weirdness.

Putting that aside, welcome to my topic! You see, ever since I heard about the first annual Talent Show on this forum, I thought that it was the perfect way for me to try and be active on this community for a while. So, I decided to write a piece for it, and I'm currently waitin' for the results. Unfortunately, I didn't have the time to finish what I had planned (or even re-read/correct all of the mistakes), but I'm still satisifed with what I've done.

So much, in fact, that I've decided to share it here, with the rest of the community. I plan for Klonoa: Crusaders of Pugiland to be a full-fledged Klonoa spin-off, and I even have a sequel in mind, though I'll get into that later. I'm not sure about the pace of my work however (1 writing piece a week? 1 every two weeks? Depends on my free time), but in any case, here is the first chapter I mean Vision done for this work. Enjoy!


Vision 1-1: The beginning of combats

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Vision 1-2: Silvan Maze of the Devil's Bard
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Vision 1-3: Lilyacoo's Ark
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Vision 1-4: Horizons of Lunshyr and Lilyacoo
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Vision 2-1: Challenges of the past and present
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Vision 2-2: Hoist the colors of adventure!
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Vision 2-3: Enter the Gourmet Blade
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Vision 2-4: Memories of past encounters
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Vision 2-5: Time of Crisis
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« Last Edit: July 17, 2017, 06:53:15 AM by Tortwag »
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Re: Klonoa: Crusaders of Pugiland
« Reply #1 on: February 08, 2016, 03:01:34 PM »
Impressive :3

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Re: Klonoa: Crusaders of Pugiland
« Reply #2 on: February 08, 2016, 03:48:32 PM »
@questriolu  First off, You're getting a + Wahoo, because that baseball-clothing Klonoa Avvie is amazing XD

Second, thank you :D I'm glad you're already enjoying this. Vision 1-2 should be out by the end of the week, since I just need to correct it.
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Re: Klonoa: Crusaders of Pugiland
« Reply #3 on: February 08, 2016, 05:19:41 PM »
@questriolu  First off, You're getting a + Wahoo, because that baseball-clothing Klonoa Avvie is amazing XD
It's from a Japan-only IOS baseball game called Famista Dream Match.
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Re: Klonoa: Crusaders of Pugiland
« Reply #4 on: February 08, 2016, 06:49:18 PM »
@Windbullet Ah. Welp, the more you know! Thanks for the info :)
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Re: Klonoa: Crusaders of Pugiland
« Reply #5 on: February 08, 2016, 07:46:51 PM »
awesome! i really enjoyed this!

i may not be the best writer, but i have a talent for spotting a good fanfic when i see one, and this certainly is a great one!

i can't wait to read more!

i'm also curious as to why Huepow is in this world. and i'm curious to other characters. and i'm curious to this spooky scary forest they're in

*curiosity intensifies*

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Re: Klonoa: Crusaders of Pugiland
« Reply #6 on: February 08, 2016, 07:56:01 PM »
@BinaryPulsar Hey there, thanks for stopping by too :D Glad you're enjoying this Fanfiction so far. I do hope this'll be great, so stya tuned! More where that came from :3

Oh, that. Heh. You'll get your answer soon enough ;)

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Re: Klonoa: Crusaders of Pugiland
« Reply #7 on: February 09, 2016, 04:14:01 AM »
Hmm...what to say about this fanfic...let's see.

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Continue on your writing, sir "Shell Master Tortwag"(:v). I will try to give my opinions for every chapter you make. I'm really looking forward to this story~

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Re: Klonoa: Crusaders of Pugiland
« Reply #8 on: February 09, 2016, 06:04:18 AM »
This was a nice read so far. :)

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Re: Klonoa: Crusaders of Pugiland
« Reply #9 on: February 09, 2016, 12:50:14 PM »
@SyraxAxoJaxco Hey there! Please allow me to call you Syrax if possible. In any case, thanks a ton for your comments. Let's see what I can do with 'em!

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There ya go!


@Voka~Daemyn Thank you! I'm glad you found it enjoyable already - hopefully the other Visions will be just as nice, if not better than this one. Stay tuned!
« Last Edit: February 09, 2016, 04:57:08 PM by Tortwag »
Currently writing a Klonoa-themed fanfiction called Crusaders of Pugiland! Discover it here: https://forums.untamedheart.us/?topic=1462.0

Also started an art topic for said fanfiction, which you can find right here: https://forums.untamedheart.us/?topic=1877.msg26101#msg26101