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Re: Klonoa: Dream Crusaders new release!
« Reply #10 on: August 13, 2020, 12:38:47 am »
Loved it. That was an intense and nearly heartbreaking read. Churapa.
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Re: Klonoa: Dream Crusaders new release!
« Reply #11 on: August 13, 2020, 12:58:34 pm »
Quite an interesting read.

I did notice a small amount of typos.

Title: "Issued Out" Striked should be changed to Struck http://dreamcrusaders.the-comic.org/comics/30/

There are a few I's that are not capitalized.
Page 27 (middle right), 28 (bottom middle), 30 (top middle and bottom right),

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Re: Klonoa: Dream Crusaders new release!
« Reply #12 on: August 13, 2020, 01:35:34 pm »
Quite an interesting read.

I did notice a small amount of typos.

Title: "Issued Out" Striked should be changed to Struck http://dreamcrusaders.the-comic.org/comics/30/

There are a few I's that are not capitalized.
Page 27 (middle right), 28 (bottom middle), 30 (top middle and bottom right),

Thank you mr. Typos guy dude person, the typos have been fixed.

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Re: Klonoa: Dream Crusaders new release!
« Reply #13 on: August 18, 2020, 04:50:41 pm »
Just read the new issue and gotta say, it was a blast. I especially liked how you gave Claire a sort of childlike personality. Though there is one suggestion about the rate of posting I would like to give. I understand that a complex work like this demands time but, up until now, you've been posting only when you've finished 10 whole pages, which results in the story only getting updated every 2 months. There is a way of us getting more frequent updates without you having to speed things up: posting each page as soon as you're done with it (instead of waiting until you finish another 9). If I'm not mistaken, this was how the original Noctis Sol used to be updated. If you do decide to use this method, I would definitely recommend you finish the whole script for the next few pages before starting to draw one so you can get a better notion of where you want the story to head next.
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Re: Klonoa: Dream Crusaders new release!
« Reply #14 on: August 21, 2020, 10:57:29 am »
Just read the new issue and gotta say, it was a blast. I especially liked how you gave Claire a sort of childlike personality. Though there is one suggestion about the rate of posting I would like to give. I understand that a complex work like this demands time but, up until now, you've been posting only when you've finished 10 whole pages, which results in the story only getting updated every 2 months. There is a way of us getting more frequent updates without you having to speed things up: posting each page as soon as you're done with it (instead of waiting until you finish another 9). If I'm not mistaken, this was how the original Noctis Sol used to be updated. If you do decide to use this method, I would definitely recommend you finish the whole script for the next few pages before starting to draw one so you can get a better notion of where you want the story to head next.

Thanks for the interest you're showing for my comic, and i do agree it would be ideally better to have pages come out one by one, but i feel much more comfortable working in issues as of now. I also sometimes happen to modify the first pages of the issues as i begin to work on the latter, so it'd be much more complicated doing that, so i'll keep working on the comic this way, at least until i happen to change my mind.

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Re: Klonoa: Dream Crusaders new release!
« Reply #15 on: September 02, 2020, 03:40:52 pm »
I just gotta say, each issue released gets progressively more fascinating, not to say that the previous ones weren't already awesome. I was gonna share my theory about Claire the Ancient, but I think someone already came up with it in a different thread. I'm just glad other people can enjoy it too~ Thanks so much for making this, I ended up getting hyped for it like it was official! Stay well, yeah?
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Re: Klonoa: Dream Crusaders new release!
« Reply #16 on: September 02, 2020, 03:57:56 pm »
Super glad you're enjoying it as much as you're telling me!
When it comes to theories i'm always happy to hear what you guys come up with so don't be afraid to reply in that thread and share yours!
I hope i can keep the hype going for as long as possible!

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Klonoa : Dream Crusaders Issue 4 is out!
« Reply #17 on: October 05, 2020, 04:51:30 pm »
Klonoa : Dream Crusaders' 4th issue is out!
You can read it at http://dreamcrusaders.the-comic.org/ as always!
Lemme know if you liked it, also please share this, i want the whole community to enjoy it!

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Re: Klonoa: Dream Crusaders new release!
« Reply #18 on: October 05, 2020, 05:48:24 pm »
 Hooray for Sorrow!!

 :hey: You. Yea, you. Keep up the good work. Proud of you. ;D
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Re: Klonoa: Dream Crusaders new release!
« Reply #19 on: October 06, 2020, 06:29:20 am »
Cool beans ;D

Looking forward to reading this ;)